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Panel 1
5:30 AM
(if you can't read this panel, there's no hope for you)
Panel 3
Randou: Just like I thought, no one's here before 6.
Panel 4
Randou: I want to sleep a little more, but if I started snoring in the same room as those 4 it'd be pretty bad...
(Guusuka, not in the glossary yet, is the sound of snoring.)
Keiko: Yuna, it's morni...ACK!
Konmori, which I refuse to put in the glossary, is the same sound as mokkori.
Yukie/Midori: KYAA!
Panel 5
Randou: I'll just take a little nap here...
Panel 6
Rina: What're you doing?
Page 3
Panel 1
Yuna: Rina! ...chan
Rina: Ahaha, I saw you leave the room, so I followed you.
Panel 2
Yuna: What about the other three?
Rina: They goofed around so much yesterday that they're still sound asleep.
Panel 3
Rina: The ocean in the morning sure is nice...
Panel 4
Randou: (I didn't expect to be alone with Rina-chan like this...!)
Panel 5
Randou: (It's weird, being here alone with her feels different from when we're together at home...)
Rina: I'm so glad we came to Okinawa.
Page 4
Panel 1
Rina: I haven't been on a fun vacation like this for a long time!
Panel 2
Rina: When you weren't around, onee-chan, I didn't even think about taking a vacation.
Panel 3
Rina: Since you've come back, this past semester has been great.
Panel 4
Yuna: Be...because of me?
Randou: (There were a bunch of times that I bust out in a cold sweat, though...)
Panel 5
Randou: (Seeing Rina-chan so cheerful makes me happy, but I feel like I'm committing a crime here...)
Panel 6
Randou: (I mean, I'm not the real Yuna!)
(Text in the vortex: I'm deceiving such a nice girl...!)
Page 5
Panel 1
Randou: (Well, of course I'm doing this "Onee-chan" act the best I can for Rina-chan's sake, but really, when you get down to it...
Panel 2
Yuna: !!
Panel 3
Yuna: Wha...what're you doing, all of a sudden?
Rina: Oh, nothing...
Panel 4
Rina: I just wanted to do this for a bit...
(Rina-chan moe...)
Panel 5
Randou: (Rina-chan... Ahh... If I'd been able to realize this dream when I was a man, I'd be so happy...)
Page 6
Panel 1
Rina: Kyaa!
Yuna: ERRK!
Panel 2
Boy: Huh? You two aren't a couple?
(By his head: "Not good...!")
Panel 3
Randou: The fuck are you doing, you little brat?!
Randou: (Ruining my dream moment like that...!)
Boy: Sorry, I just thought I'd cool down a dumb couple. I didn't think you were both girls--
(A few things here. Baka. Couple (kappuru). Bakappuru. Get it? And hiyakasu is both to cool down and to make fun of--take your pick)
Panel 4
Randou: Hey, wait up! You shouldn't go swimming in the morning! (it's still too cold!)
Boy: I'll be fine!
Panel 5
Randou: What a fucking rude brat... ah!
Panel 6
Randou: (Shit, I've really done it now... I started talking as rudely as I used to)
(Recall from the glossary that kusu is the sound of giggling...)
Page 7
Panel 1
Rina: Onee-chan, you've always been different from me--more energetic and active than me. But ever since you've been back, it's been a lot more severe.
Panel 2
Yuna: Y...you think it's weird? Strange?
Randou: (Oh, shit...)
Panel 3
Rina: No... but... just a little... you... remind me of the person I like... (I think)
Panel 4
Randou: (Person she likes?!)
Panel 5
Yuna: Rina! You found a guy you like?!
Randou: (No...!)
(Pretty much the first time he's forgotten the -chan at the end)
Panel 6
Rina: Don't make me say it... you already know...
Page 8
Panel 1
Rina: It's Randou-senpai.
(Box: Slightly Rina-fied vision)
Panel 2
Randou: (M...me?)
Panel 4
Randou: (Rina-chan... likes me! I heard her say it once before, but... what a happy sound!)
Panel 5
Rina: Everyone at school said "He's scary", or "I don't want to get any closer to him"... I didn't hear anything about him but bad gossip.
(box by Randou: "Note: This is his image")
Panel 6
Rina: But I didn't think that it was true at all.
Page 9
Panel 1
Rina: He was small, and violent like his name implied, but I thought he was great. He said what he wanted to say, and did what he wanted to do.
(Huge pun note here. The kanji in Randou's name are "ran" for "riot/disorder" and "dou" for "hall/chamber". "Doudou" means magnificent, and is his name kanji twice. "Ranbou" means "violent/lawless" and has that same ran kanji)
Panel 2
Rina: He had everything that I didn't... I was so jealous.
Panel 3
Rina: ...wait, what am I saying? Ahahaha...
Randou: (...Rina-chan)
Panel 4
Randou: (Talking about me like that... it's embarrassing! But... nice)
(Kanou's note in the spaces: "It's sure spinning a lot more than usual")
Panel 5
Rina: And... there were times when he could be a pretty nice guy.
Page 10
Panel 1
Rina: But I'm the only one who knows that.
Panel 2
Rina: It was around May of last year, I think... that was the first time I started noticing senpai)
Panel 3
(Tiny, tiny word bubbles: "What the hell're you doing?" "I got it, okay?!")
Panel 4
Boy 1: Just a little further in...!
Boy 2: It's no use, I can't reach!
Boy 1: What should we do now?
(See previous notes on "dou shiyou")
Panel 5
Rina: What happened, you two?
Panel 6
Boy 1: My dog's stuck in the sewer pipe and we can't get him out!
Page 11
Panel 1
Rina: Really? Oh, no!
(Kuuun kuuun is, I gather, the sound of a dog whimpering)
Panel 2
Rina: You can't reach him with your hand?
Boy 1: We've been trying that the whole time, and it's been no use!
Panel 3
Rina: I'll call the police or the fire department and come back, okay? Keep trying!
Panel 4
Boy 1: Can we get him out with a pole?
Boy 2: Huh? The dog's stopped whimpering. Is it alright?
Panel 5
Randou: What're you doing?
Boy 2: We're saving this dog!
Panel 6
Randou: The dog's inside there?
Boy 2: Yeah, so shut u--
Panel 7
Boy 2: eep.
Page 12
Panel 1
Randou: Ho? You want me to shut up? ME? I seeee...
Panel 2
Boy 2: Waugh!
Boy 1: We're sorry!
Panel 3
Rina: Oh, you two! The fire department's coming... huh?
(Text by running kid's heads: "I'm scared!")
Page 13
Panel 1
Randou: Uryaaa!
(See the glossary)
Panel 2
Rina: (eh? Eh? WHAT!?)
(price tag on her head: "Rina")
Panel 3
Rina: (That's... the third year student I sometimes see on the bus, Randou?)
Panel 4
(A generic grunt/growl, "funmeeeee" is)
Page 14
Panel 2
Randou: Whoa, you're still alive? That's great.
(Okay, so I was wrong in chapter 1. He apparently did one nice thing in his life before becoming Yuna)
Panel 4
Rina: And I think that after that, I started following him with my eyes whenever he was around.
Panel 5
Randou: (I see... that's what happeend. I didn't think Rina-chan saw that...)
Panel 6
Randou: (Hey, wait, I remember that back then--)
Policeman 1: Hey, what're you doing!?
Page 15
Panel 1
Policeman 1: This is an outrage!
Policeman 2: You're coming to the police box with us!
(See chapter 8 for notes about police boxes)
Randou: Hey, wait, there's an explanation for all of this!
Panel 2
Policeman 1: We caught you red-handed destroying public property!
Randou: Hey, wait, listen to me!
Panel 3
Rina: And after that, Senpai got arrested before I could explain things...
(by her head: "Poor guy...")
Randou: (Ri...Rina-chan)
Panel 4
Rina: It really was bad...
Panel 5
Rina: !!
(See the glossary... "basha" is the sound of water splashing)
Panel 6
Rina: Hey, isn't that the kid from before?
Panel 7
Rina: He's drowning!
Yuna: That idiot!
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Panel 1
Rina: Onee-chan!
Panel 2
Yukie: Ooooi, is this where you guys were? Let's go have breakfast!
Panel 3
Rina: It's terrible! That kid is drowning!
Panel 4
Rina: And Onee-chan just... what should I do?!
Yukie: Just calm down, Rina!
Panel 5
Rina: (Why am I so nervous? Onee-chan!)
Panels 6, 7
(Just sounds in this one... some light splashing, and coughing)
Page 17
Panel 1
Yuna: He's okay, it looks like his leg just cramped up.
Panel 3
Rina: (?! Randou-senpai?)
Page 18
Panel 1
Yukie: I'll call an ambulance!
Panel 3
Rina: Onee-chan?
Panel 5
Rina: A...ahahahaha!
Panel 6
Rina: It might be because I was reminiscing, but... for a second there, you looked like Randou-senpai, Onee-chan.
Yuna: Uh... could you help me take these things off?
Panel 7
Rina: But you were really cool, Onee-chan.
Page 19
Panel 1
Rina: Just like Senpai, back then.
Panel 2
Rina: I hope I'm not making him angry in heaven by saying that...
Randou: (But he's not in heaven, he's right here...)
Panel 3
Rina: I'm hungry, let's go back to the hotel!
Panel 4
Randou: (Rina-chan still loves me... I need to find the real Yuna-chan quickly. I want to go back to my old self)
Panel 5
Box: (One hour later)
Randou: (Damn, those starfish were poisounous, weren't they...)
(Text by Rina: "Onee-chan, EWWWWW")
Doki count: 9 (in only two frames!)