Page 1: cover
Page 2
Panel 2
???: Yaaaaay, we're in Okinawa!
("W*i" is one of two words in Japanese that I refuse to say. It's a childish/feminine shout akin to "yay!"... though it's also the male first person pronoun in Kansai-ben)
(above the girl's butt: "This doesn't mean anything")
Page 3
Panel 1
Keiko: It's hard to believe, isn't it? We're here in Okinawa on the first day of summer vacation!
Midori: And it's all because of Yuna! We should all show her some thanks.
Panel 2
Midori: Thank you!
Yuna: Hahaha... it's not that big a deal...
Randou: (Shit... we've all ended up going to Okinawa.)
Panel 3
Randou: (And that means I'll be trapped with these 4 girls for 4 days and 3 nights. If I make even one wrong move they'll find out about me and then I'll be in deep shit)
Panel 4
???: Yay!
???: Whoa, we're going to stay here?
Panel 5
Randou: (Anyway, I need to find a way to stay alone in the room...)
Panel 6
Clerk: We've been waiting for you. You're Kurimi-sama, yes?
(Urgh... keigo. My nemesis)
Panel 7
Clerk: All five guests will be staying in one suite.
Rina: Wow, sounds fun!
Randou: (WHAT?!)
Page 4
Panel 1
Midori: This place is HUGE!
Rina: And this is where we're all going to sleep?
Panel 2
Randou: (Three nights of everyone sleeping together?! I thought we would get private rooms!)
???: So, wanna get going?
???: Of course!
Panel 3
Randou: (I asked Manabe and he gave me the artificial bust, but... how long can I fool them with this?)
(box: See Volume 1, chapter 7)
Panel 4
???: It's as hot as I heard it would be
Page 5
Panel 1
Randou: (What are you guys DOING taking your clothes off?!)
Midori: I kind of want to walk around outside like this, you know?
Panel 2
Rina: Onee-chan, hurry up and change so we can go to the beach!
Randou: (Rina-chan, you too?!)
Panel 3
Yuna: G...go on ahead without me! I'll follow you out in a bit!
Panel 4
???: C'mon, get out here, Yuna!
(Noises include Randou panting, and people outside making with the "w*i" again)
???: Oh well, we're gonna go ahead, okay?
Randou: (My heart's not going to last until I go back to my old body...)
Panel 6
Midori: Geez, you guys!
Page 6
Panel 1
Midori: Put on some sexier swimsuits!
Panel 2
Midori: And Yuna! You're wearing pants!
(I cheated a bit here. She says that Yuna isn't wearing a swimsuit on the bottom... which is an awkward construction in English)
Yuna: We...well, that's because...
Randou: (This is as far as I go...)
Panel 3
Midori: We've been waiting to go to Okinawa for a long time! And Rina's the only one of all of you that's even trying!
Panel 4
Randou: (Whoa... Rina-chan in a swimsuit!)
Panel 5
Midori: If you don't put more effort into it, the boys won't pay attention to you!
Panel 6
Yukie: What, Midori, you want to get hit on?
(Keiko: She's pretty weird...)
(A note: The word they're using here is the passive form of "nanpa suru". Nanpa lit. means skirt-chaser. So to have your skirt chased would be to be hit on)
Midori: Well, duh! We're at the beach! We're in swimsuits! What would I do if I didn't get hit on?
Page 7
Panel 1
Yukie: But I have a boyfriend already...
Rina: And I'm embarrassed...
Keiko: And I don't really like boys...
Randou: (And I'm a man...)
(Under each person is their name--it says "Yuna" under Randou)
Midori: You're all useless!
Panel 2
Keiko: Hey, there're mongoose vs. snake shows here in Okinawa. Let's go see one after we swim!
Rina: You really like animals, don't you, Keiko?
Panel 3
Midori: MEN COME FIRST!
(Nanpa ga saki desu! i.e. skirt-chasers, i.e. men)
Rina: Yes'm...!
Panel 4
Rina: Man... being popular with the boys is what Midori lives for.
Keiko: Nothing we can do about it.
Randou: (I see... she's that kind of girl)
Panel 5
Randou: (And she only has those assets going for her...)
Midori: I wonder if there're any cool guys here...
Panel 6
Midori: What're you doing just standing around, Yuna? Spread this on me!
Yuna: Eh?
Page 8
Panel 1
Midori: A scene with you spreading oil on my back will really appeal to the boys on the beach!
Panel 2
Midori: Yeah, that's it, use a lot of it. Hmm? It seems kinda warm, though...
Panel 3
Midori: ...Hey, what's this? Blood?
Panel 4
Midori: Hey, Yuna!
Rina: Onee-chan!
Panel 5
Midori: Geez, what are you doing?
Yuna: Sorry...
Panel 6
Midori: What's with you getting a nosebleed, anyway?
Randou: (Well, that's because...)
Panel 7
Yukie: You reacted as if you were a guy!
Keiko: Yeah, really!
Page 9
Panel 1
Yuna: We...well, the blood just rushed to my head is all...
Randou: (sh..shit!)
Panel 2
Yuna: I'm just going to go to cool off in the ocean for a bit.
Rina: Wait, Onee-chan, your pants--
Yuna: I'll be fine!
Panel 4
Randou: It's not like I can help reacting like a guy in front of 4 girls in swimsuits....
Panel 5
Randou: Besides, it's the first time I've been to the ocean like this.
Panel 6
Randou: (Until now, I've only been to the beach to train with the karate club.)
Randou (past): Hey, put some effort into it!
Karate club: O...ossu!
Panel 7
Rina: Onee-chan, let's play some beach volleyball!
Page 10
Panel 1
Randou: (Hmm... I can handle a little beach volleyball)
Panel 2
Yuna: Huh? Where's Midori?
Keiko: She said she was going off to find some guys.
(Small text in the corner: "They'll come for sure!")
Panels 3,4,5
(Everything in these panels is just misc. sounds of people playing a game--serving, laughing, and bumping into each other)
Panel 6
Rina: Oh, sorry!
Yuna: UPU...
(Upu, not listed in the manga glossary yet, is the sound of gulping/trying not to vomit.)
Panel 7
Yukie: Let's go!
Page 11
Panels 1, 2, 3
(More misc. shouts and laughs--with Randou going "UUUUURGH" and making with the mad doki)
Panel 4
Yukie: Yuna? What's wrong?
Yuna: I...I'm just a little tired...
Randou: (There's no way I can stand up right now...)
(small text: "She's leaning forward...!")
Panel 5
Randou: (This is a storm of stimulation... The sea in summer sure is fearsome!)
Panel 6
Randou: I guess I'll just ignore everything and get a tan...
Page 12
Panel 1
Midori: I give up, Yuna!
Panel 2
Midori: There are just no fine guys on here.
Randou: (Nice angle!)
Panel 3
Yuna: Whoa, Midori, what kind of way to sit is that?!
Randou: (I can't even sleep!?)
Panel 4
Yuna: ...OW!
Panel 5
Midori: What's wrong?
Yuna: My butt...!
Panel 6
Midori: It's swelling up! No doubt about it, your pants trapped some salt water and the sun dried it out!
Panel 7
Midori: You should wash it off, quick!
Yuna: Ye...yeah, I'll do that! Ow ow ow...
Page 13
Panel 1
Randou: (I have to get to the suite's bathroom!)
Panel 2
Employee: Oh, ma'am!
Panel 3
Employee: I'm terribly sorry, but presently, your bathroom is out of order. If you need to take a bath, please make use of the large bath house on the fifth floor.
(Keigo! My greatest foe)
Panel 4
Employee: At present, the bath is reserved for the guests staying in this room...
Yuna: Okay, I get it!
Randou: (Shit, this is just not my day!)
Panel 5
Sign: Rock bath
Other sign: Reserved
Panel 6
Randou: Whew, I feel alive again...
Page 14
Panel 1
Randou: Oh, and I should take these off next...
Panel 2
Randou: She said this was reserved, so I should be fine.
Box: (the new model of artificial bust is a B cup (less adhesive))
Panel 3
Randou: Ah, I feel so free.... This is the first time I've been alone since we got to Okinawa.
Panel 4
Randou: (Well... I'm happy that I got to go on a trip with Rina-chan and the others... but I don't know if I can put up with three more days like this)
Panel 5
Randou: It's a vacation we've been waiting a long time for, but it's safer if I just go around on my own.
Panel 6
???: Hey, her clothes are here!
Rina: I knew it, Onee-chan went here!
Panel 7
Randou: (ACK! You gotta be kidding me)
Page 15
Panel 1
Midori: Yuna, we all decided to join you in the bath!
Keiko: That's a dirty trick, going in alone!
Panel 2
Midori: Huh? She's not here.
Panel 3
Midori: Well, whatever, let's get in!
Keiko: Wow, this place is huge!
Randou: (aa...aaaaaah!)
Page 16
Panel 1
Randou: (H...how did it come to this?)
Midori: Wow, we weren't out there for very long, but I'm already tanning.
Yukie: That's Okinawa for you!
Panel 2
Midori: Aahh... the guys all sucked today...
Yukie: Well, there's always tomorrow.
Keiko: What? But the mongoose show is tomorrow!
Rina: You're still going on about that?
Panel 3
Keiko: That reminds me, why was Yuna wearing pants today?
Yukie: She probably forgot to shave.
(Ken tells me that "ge no shori" is the process of shaving armpit hair and the bikini lines. I... feel like I'm learning a bit TOO much)
Midori: Yeah, that might be it.
Panel 4
Midori: Alright, we should all hold her down and shave her tonight!
(small text: Ahahaha, let's do it!)
(I swear I'm not making this up)
Randou: (That's one miserable plan they're cooking up...)
Panel 5
Keiko: But where's Yuna?
Midori: She has to be here somewhere, her clothes were outside.
Page 17
Panel 1
Midori: Hey, that sauna room over there!
Panel 2
Yukie: Which one?
(Randou makes what's basically a "blub" sound here)
Panel 3
Yukie: She's not there!
Rina: That's weird...
Panel 4
Keiko: I know, she wants to hide so she can scare us!
Midori: Alright, we definitely have to find her now!
Panel 5
(Arrow: In the same place)
Randou: (Shit... shit... if they find me, it's the end of the line!)
Panel 6
Randou: (The exit's just over there...)
Panel 7
Randou: (If I can just make it there without anyone seeing me... huh?)
Page 18
Panel 1
Randou: (The walls and ceiling here are all made out of rock...)
Panel 2
Randou: (Which means...)
Panel 3
Midori: I found her, right he--huh?
Panel 4
???: Was she there?
Midori: No... where'd she run off to?
Panel 5
Midori: She can't have just run out naked...
Keiko: Yeah, it's weird...
Panel 6
Randou: (Alright... just a little more...!)
Panel 7
Randou: (Fight! Charge!)
(Randou is using sports terms here--Fight needs no explanation, but "ippatsu" figuratively means "I/we/you can finish this with just one big effort)
Page 19
Panel 2
Randou: Eh?
Panel 3
Randou: (WHAT!?)
Panel 4
Randou: (Noooooo!)
Yukie: Kyaaaa!
Page 20
Panel 1
???: What... what was that?
Panel 2
Yukie: ee...
Keiko: Ack...!
Panel 3
Keiko: Kyaaa, a peeping Tom!
Yukie: Noooooo!
(Please remember that "iya" is as much a generic scream of distaste/fear as it is a refusal)
Boxes: (Yuna (Randou))
(Wrapped around his head while falling)
Panel 4
Randou: MMPH!
(Mogogogo is the sound of mumbling while gagged... it will shortly be added to the glossary)
Keiko: Hey, he's getting away!
Panel 5
Keiko: Wait up!
Page 21
Panel 1
Keiko; ?! Yuna!!
Randou: (Sa...safe!)
(Caption: Changing clothes at mach speed!)
Panel 2
Midori: You were here all this time?
Keiko: Then... just now...
Panel 3
Employee: Ma'am, did something just happen?
Keiko: Yeah! A butt naked peeping Tom was just here!
Panel 4
Keiko: He's not outside? He was a short, weaselly-looking degenerate with a tiny thing!
Panel 5
Employee: Right now, the police are investigating, but we'll keep a look out also.
Panel 6
Keiko: Take care of it!
Employee: We're terribly sorry, ma'am.
Rina: Onee-chan? What's wrong?
(text next to Randou's head: "Short... tiny thing...")
Omnipotent narrator: And that's how Randou's first day in Okinawa with four girls ended.
Doki count: 13